Score: 10

"Great Stuff"

submission: BonusStage:TheLostEpisode

date: July 3, 2006

I've been watching Bonus Stage since Episode 60 came out, and loved it ever since. Yeah, I was sad when you decided to end it, but TSSSS looks great so far and M&T looks pretty good too. Keep up the great work, man, I'm totally going to get the full version!

Score: 9

"Awesome Hanukkah Game!"

submission: Defend Your Temple

date: January 6, 2006

I don't know too much about Hanukkah, but the opening story was a great study guide for it. But the most important part about the flash is the game itself, where it excels on all levels. Fair difficulty, decent control setups, and the weapon/upgrade shop made everything fair and fun.

The one thing I would probably change is the Shekel System. I would've had more shekels spaced out on the map that disappeared after a certain amount of time so that you wouldn't have to move from one side of the map to the other so much, but other than that I had so much fun playing it all the way through! MAZEL TOV!

Score: 4

"Interesting Concept, Insufficent Delivery"

submission: Will the Wolf Survive?

date: January 6, 2006

The concept is good, music choice was excellent. But probably the biggest selling point is getting some fluid and dynamic animation (i.e. "Not reusing the same character designs over and over," "FACIAL EXPRESSIONS"), as well as getting a bit of a story element out of it. Does the wolf try to seek revenge for the loss of his puppy, only to meet the hunter's rifle? Or is the hunter apologetic to the wolf because of what he just did and he decides to let him go?

You've got the right idea going, and I'm sure you're getting better at flash, but you need to come up with the actual flash-creating in order to support your concepts. Or else, well, they'll get blamed.